Overall I feel you have made a very positive start to the course. Your written work is very good and I am impressed by your commitment, enthusiasm and desire to do well. You are currently working at a high Proficient level (A/B); in order to ensure your work falls comfortably within your targeted A grade, you should do the following going forward:
Get your work up to date; Your 5th Film Opening should by now be on your blog; please complete this by the end of this week.
Your analyses need to make better use of semiotics. This means describing denotation and connotation. In other words what is shown and what is implied. You understand these concepts but don’t refer to them correctly. See me if you are unsure.
Now that we are approaching production, I would recommend that you start blogging more regularly on everything that you are doing on the course. This could start with your swede; write a blog (or do a vlog) on your contribution to the production and what your challenges/difficulties were in achieving your swede.
Mr VZ
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